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Suicide by ~xangelle:iconxangelle:

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By suicide I don't mean death
I let go of my final breath
To dream on to another place
Where noone knows my broken face
Where noone knows my crying eyes
Where noone knows my see-through lies
Where I don't smile because I must
Ashes to ashes and dust to dust

By suicide I don't mean pain
Jet black horses on a ghostly rein
By letting go of what you've done
I know the battle is almost won
Leave me now, I have to go
It's not what I feel, it's what I know
If you won't hold me, then say goodnight
I know I can still win this fight
©2004-2009 ~xangelle
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~risquezebra Oct 26, 2004, 3:26:07 AM
interesting poem. it flows really well.

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~Synius Oct 26, 2004, 4:11:00 AM
It does indeed have flow, and its quite deep to my eyes

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I speak in prose, and let him rymes make.
--Chaucer.
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~xangelle Oct 26, 2004, 4:22:38 AM
thanks! its one of the few things i write that i actually feel, well, i kinda exaggerated, but yeah...
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~Synius Oct 26, 2004, 4:25:59 AM
Hey, there is nothing wrong with a bit of exaggeration

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I speak in prose, and let him rymes make.
--Chaucer.
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~xangelle Oct 26, 2004, 4:28:01 AM
yup, its called poetic license for a reason!!
actually, where it says golden, its meant to say ghostly, my bad :p
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~Synius Oct 26, 2004, 5:27:45 AM
one way or another it still works

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I speak in prose, and let him rymes make.
--Chaucer.
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~antiskeptic Jan 29, 2005, 4:06:12 AM
i am very very immpressed... suicidal poems at the best... not because im morbide... but u just get so much emotion out of the *claps* well done be proud \m/ ^_^ \m/

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~* Blood lose: Effective pain relief *~
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